CommentsUmm... I don't mean to sound ungrateful or anything, but could you please condense the chapter into one deviation or something???
Like Yuumei did with 1-3? Because, quite honestly, it ruins the tension when suddenly you arrive at shot that reads in rainbow letters "TO PIGFARTS!" Thank you!! -- "The world isn't beautiful; therefore, it is." Lol!!! Nevermind!!! I never really noticed how much more amusing comments are for individual screenshots! and I also didn't realize that you were Yuumei...//shot
-- "The world isn't beautiful; therefore, it is." Could you put all chapters here so it's easier to go through the entire story from the beginning?
-- Hi. I'm Taylor Rose, and I'm an ocean addict. This chapter is possibly my favourite, not just because of it's crucial plot twists, it's relevant messages, and the way it makes you really think, especially about everything you've read in the story up til now, but also the colours...I love the transition of colours, and how well they link in with the mood, despite in fact being an effect of time passing...truly beautiful.
-- You don't need to make me paranoid, I do a good job of that myself. Don't I? |